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#21 RabbitRan

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Posted 16 June 2011 - 10:25 AM

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Posted 17 June 2011 - 11:50 AM

View PostScott, on 15 June 2011 - 04:57 PM, said:

not bad til it all went clusterfuck at 0:45 or so

Anyone else feel this way?
I don't think it sounds like much of a clusterfuck at all. Just a dirty oldschool riff I wrote
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#23 RabbitRan

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Posted 17 June 2011 - 01:46 PM

Anymore thoughts on my doohickey? I want to do another cover of something soon

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Posted 17 June 2011 - 02:56 PM

I know this seems weird and off-topic, but I think someone here should cover Annuals.

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Posted 17 June 2011 - 04:28 PM

View PostOurSerratedDust, on 17 June 2011 - 02:56 PM, said:

I know this seems weird and off-topic, but I think someone here should cover Annuals.

I very much want to do so. Chords are kind of hard to find, though, and I don't really have the attention span to figure them out. But I would love to do a stripped down cover of Brother, Hair Don't Grow, Springtime, Hardwood Floor, etc

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Posted 17 June 2011 - 07:21 PM

Yeah, I agree with you there. For what it is worth, I had found some chords for Brother on ultimateguitar.com a while back. When I messed around with them on my acoustic, they seemed pretty solid.

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Posted 22 June 2011 - 11:54 PM

http://theminutesoci...d-you-happen-to

Here's something I did. I went for a psyche-feel.

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Posted 23 June 2011 - 12:34 PM

i could listen to Brother on repeat for literally my entire life

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Posted 30 June 2011 - 09:05 PM

eh jk im gonna wait its not done yet.

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Posted 07 July 2011 - 12:55 PM

Work in progress:
http://soundcloud.co.../love-me-tender

feedback?
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Posted 10 July 2011 - 10:31 AM

I've just uploaded an instrumental song I've written today. It's pretty standard 'post-rock' I guess so may not be to everyone's tastes but I enjoyed writing it.

http://soundcloud.co...-lung/hourglass

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 09:38 AM

Trying to catch up on some of the listening here.

View PostHenry, on 22 June 2011 - 11:54 PM, said:

http://theminutesoci...happen-toHere's something I did. I went for a psyche-feel.
I liked this one a lot, very cool feel.


View PostTrueDarkness, on 07 July 2011 - 12:55 PM, said:

Work in progress:http://soundcloud.co.../love-me-tenderfeedback?
This one was also really cool, especially the chorus. One small criticism though, I thought the mix seemed a little high. It could have been my shitty laptop speakers though. :) Otherwise, great job.


View Postcarlj, on 10 July 2011 - 10:31 AM, said:

I've just uploaded an instrumental song I've written today. It's pretty standard 'post-rock' I guess so may not be to everyone's tastes but I enjoyed writing it.http://soundcloud.co...-lung/hourglass
This was dope too. It just had a really neat feel to it. Great work.




My friend and I came up with a neat concept album idea a while ago. This album would span the 1800's and some of the important events that happened in America during that time, including the Civil War. It may sound a little boring, but I thought that there were a lot of cool sounds and feels that could be used to put these events to music.

A while ago, I wrote half of one of the songs about the Civil War. I just uploaded it today, so I'd like to get some feedback on it. I'm focusing less on the song structure and more on the actual instruments and chord changes. No words yet, cause I can't sing (if anyone on here is interested in doing vocals, please message me!)

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Posted 14 September 2011 - 05:51 PM

View PostOurSerratedDust, on 18 July 2011 - 09:38 AM, said:

Trying to catch up on some of the listening here.

View PostHenry, on 22 June 2011 - 11:54 PM, said:

http://theminutesoci...happen-toHere's something I did. I went for a psyche-feel.
I liked this one a lot, very cool feel.


View PostTrueDarkness, on 07 July 2011 - 12:55 PM, said:

Work in progress:http://soundcloud.co.../love-me-tenderfeedback?
This one was also really cool, especially the chorus. One small criticism though, I thought the mix seemed a little high. It could have been my shitty laptop speakers though. :) Otherwise, great job.


View Postcarlj, on 10 July 2011 - 10:31 AM, said:

I've just uploaded an instrumental song I've written today. It's pretty standard 'post-rock' I guess so may not be to everyone's tastes but I enjoyed writing it.http://soundcloud.co...-lung/hourglass
This was dope too. It just had a really neat feel to it. Great work.




My friend and I came up with a neat concept album idea a while ago. This album would span the 1800's and some of the important events that happened in America during that time, including the Civil War. It may sound a little boring, but I thought that there were a lot of cool sounds and feels that could be used to put these events to music.

A while ago, I wrote half of one of the songs about the Civil War. I just uploaded it today, so I'd like to get some feedback on it. I'm focusing less on the song structure and more on the actual instruments and chord changes. No words yet, cause I can't sing (if anyone on here is interested in doing vocals, please message me!)

The Nation Divided I: Secession in Succession

I really like the progression and various instruments.

Here is a track I did today.

http://soundcloud.co...dnt-demo-by-tms

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Posted 18 September 2011 - 09:37 AM

hey guys, here's a short little instrumental that I recorded yesterday. Been writing the melody for about a week or so, I think it's something you guys will definitely like. let me know what you think!

http://soundcloud.co...-1/piano-piece2
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Posted 24 October 2011 - 07:16 PM



I was really stoned, so my singing may be a little out of key.

Some song I wrote.

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Posted 25 October 2011 - 02:54 AM

View PostTrueDarkness, on 18 September 2011 - 09:37 AM, said:

hey guys, here's a short little instrumental that I recorded yesterday. Been writing the melody for about a week or so, I think it's something you guys will definitely like. let me know what you think!

http://soundcloud.co...-1/piano-piece2
That's really cool man!! Love it!

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Posted 25 October 2011 - 02:55 AM

Hey guys, I'm in a post-rock band called "They move like wolves". We just did a live recording that turned out pretty cool. Would definitely appreciate if you guys checked it out and gave me your thoughts!!
Hereis the link!

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Posted 25 October 2011 - 06:59 AM

just been listening to the stuff posted here, awesome!

I thought I might as well get in on this and give you guys a link to my bands soundcloud page

www.soundcloud.com/afteranalibi

listen to the song 'Moving up in the World' for some lyrics on a kinda familiar theme ;] (.. prostitutes)

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Posted 25 October 2011 - 09:07 PM

if it counts, I composed a solo piano piece once, for an exam module.

you can hear it here, on my tumblr

that's all I've really written so far

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Posted 29 October 2011 - 05:43 PM

So Much More (Version 2)


Here is a new song I did. I decided to not be lazy and actually add some substance; separate vocal tracks, as well as an ambient progression towards the end of the song to close it out.

The vocals and guitar are fairly mixed well together - but I admit they could be a lot better. Then again, I'm recording using audacity and a webcam microphone, so I'm managing fairly well.

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